1. Get your story Peer-Reviewed!
-Have someone you know, and trust, look at your work to let you know if your missing spelling or have grammar errors. Who knows, maybe they will find that you forgot to write a whole paragraph.
2. PROSPECTIVE IS KEY!!!
-Much like my tips for poetry, in your short fiction focus on the point of view. The power of POV is almost more important in short fiction than poetry.
3. Sensory Details, Sensory Details, Sensory Details!
-Heighten the reader’s senses with sensory details. Short fiction has more word count to play with then most poetry. Use this to your advantage and really dive into the sensory information surrounding your story.
4. Broaden the viewpoint.
-Do not just focus on the sight the POV gives, try considering other factors. If you are writing from the POV of someone looking at an old picture think about the time difference the two have. What underlining plot does this give the story? What senses do time force your reader to experience?
5. Have a clear plot.
-You won’t believe how many people forget to have a plot to their story! Don’t be one of them. Your story can have as many amazing details and senses as possible, but if it does not have a plot it isn’t a good story.
6. Surprise yourself!
-While you should have a plot to a story don’t make it feel like you're writing an academic paper. By rule of thumb if you are writing and find yourself surprised by were the story went, then your reader will be just as surprised. It may feel like the story wrote you at times, but it’s that feeling that just may get your story published.
1. Pick an image.
-Sounds basic right? Well when you want to write a poem about a certain image it is almost imperative you know exactly which image you want. For the Hot Dish Challenge, we provide the images for you. Just pick one and start writing.
2. Don’t just focus on the story of the image, but instead think about the senses it provokes.
-Poetry is not just what you can see, but what you can experience through all senses. Focus not only on the sight of the image but also the sounds, taste, touch, and smell that radiate from it.
3. Be specific with your details.
-Piggybacking off of number two, be as detailed with your senses as possible. Don’t generalize these details, but do not feel like they all must be positive senses either.
4. Prospective is key!
-When you think and later write about your chosen image what sort of prospective are you going to use? Who is narrating, telling, seeing, or hearing this story? Is it the young child across the street? The older gentleman with a hate for phones? Is it you as you see yourself in the image? Prospective is key and can help you provide more specific sensory details to spice up your piece.
5. Pick a form that helps you get at these sensory details.
-Another way to help you write sensory details besides prospective is adopting a format that limits how you can write a piece. My favorite form for beginners is called the 10 to 1. In a 10 to 1 your first line starts with 10 words, then 9, then 8, until you get to a one-word line. This form forces a writer to consider word choice and gives the writer natural points of emphasis that they can fit into. There are other easy and more advance forms of poetry you can try that may help you get the sensory details out of your chosen image.
6. Let your imagination go!
-Just like number 1 this sounds basic right? Surprisingly it isn’t! When you pick an image, an immediate reaction is that you have to write about the story the artist of the image wanted it to tell. Or at least the poem has to be about the most pronounced things in the image. This is not the case!!!! The image is there to serve you the writer. If you’re writing a poem based of the image of a house it does not have to be about the house. It could be about a bird in it, or the person(s) looking at the house.
7. Have fun with it.
-Trying to incorporate these different aspects into your poem may seem somewhat stressful or difficult but don’t feel like it must be. One aspect of this challenge is to not only challenge you, but to allow writers to explore different avenues of writing that appeal to them. Write to have fun!
Advice from the Editor of Hot Dish Magazine
1. Before you submit have a friend or family member peer-review your work.
- It’s also good to have a second pair of eyes to point out grammar and spelling mistakes.
2. Research the magazine you are submitting to.
- For example, Hot Dish Magazine is a literary magazine in the Midwest, however if you have been researching us you would see that this year we are going National.
3. Read what the submission guidelines are.
- Hot Dish Magazine is only for High schoolers 9-12. Therefore, if you aren’t considered in grades 9-12 then your work won’t be reviewed by us. Just like Hot Dish many magazines have guidelines that highlight who can submit, what you can submit, and when you can submit.
4. Be mindful of entry fees
- Paying to submit isn’t all that bad. However, if you are newer to the literary world or simply money poor there are plenty of magazines you can submit to for free. Sites such as submitable.com even make it easier for writers to find these magazines and submit to them.
5. Include a brief cover letter that covers who you are and why you wrote this piece.
- As an editor myself I know that I won’t always look at someone’s cover letter first. However, it is still important to include one that gives an author bio and in our case something that inspired this piece.
6. Don’t be disheartened by rejection.
- We all get rejections; it’s just how the literary world is. As a writer it hurts to be rejected repeatedly, but as an editor it still difficult to decide which works to accept to thier magazine. So, while you may be sad about being rejected keep pressing forward and know that the editor is also sad about having to reject work.
7. Ask for feedback from the editor.
- Not all editors will have time to give feedback, but some like Hot Dish Magazine will immediately give you feedback. So, if an editor gives feedback to some writing of yours and asks for revisions give them a response. If not, it is always alright to email the editor to see if they had some feedback to give you.
8. Keep records of failure as well as success.
- Not only does this give you a sense of being proactive, it will also help you later down the road when you need to know where your poems have been published before.
9. Continue to submit material year-long
- Whether you are a new writer or well published writer you still need to constantly be submitting material to magazines. This is how you get published as well as build up relationships with a multitude of editors. Whether or not you get accepted, continuing to submit is still getting you something.
10. Be mindful of your simultaneous submissions (submitting the same poem to different magazines)
- While simultaneous submissions are a good way to get your poems out, some magazines do not permit simultaneous submissions. This may be the case for some magazines you submit for, but many will allow simultaneous submissions. If one of your simultaneous submissions get accepted, be sure to let the other magazine you submitted the same piece to know. It will be a great help to them and doesn’t lead to the awkward conversation that you already got it accepted elsewhere.
By Olivia Wieseler
Sour Heart (2017) by Jenny Zhang is a collection of short stories about the lives of immigrant children in the United States. Having immigrated to New York City from Shanghai, China, when she was five years old, Zhang often writes about Chinese American identity and coming of age in a new country and culture. Her stories in Sour Heart are no exception.
Each story in this collection is from the point of view of a different Chinese American immigrant child. While the stories reflected much of the hardship that Chinese American immigrants had to go through searching for a better life, some stories did not focus on that but rather themes that all people go through: peer pressure, sex education, going to college, annoying siblings, over-protective parents, desire for freedom, and more. I think these themes interwoven with the theme of immigrant identity help make each character more human and help the reader to empathize with the characters and their hardships as immigrants to America.
While Zhang uses almost a different narrative structure for each story, they are all draped in poetic language. The powerful imagery Zhang used was often organized like a stream-of-consciousness. Her first story in the collection, “We love you, Crispina,” had the most prevalent use of this style. While unique and perhaps more realistic, it did make the stories somewhat difficult to follow at times. Overall, however, this style works to give the reader a sense of putting him/herself in the shoes of the narrator. One of my favorite parts about the structure of the collection overall is that each story is interwoven with each other, barely noticeably, as the families encounter one another briefly in their search to make their lives better in America.
Personally, it wasn’t until about halfway in that I started to enjoy the collection. It could have been because of the slightly difficult following of the stream-of-consciousness style of writing or some of the unexpected mature content. However, it finally started growing on me, possibly because “The Evolution of My Brother” struck my heart personally. The narrator showed how her tight bond with her much younger brother began to loosen as her desire for freedom and independence sent her away to college:
“…and now that I am on my own, the days of resenting my parentes for loving me too much and my brother for needing me too intensely have been replaced with the days of feeling bewildered by the prospect of finding some other identity besides ‘daughter’ or ‘sister.’”
I would recommend this collection of stories to get a taste of Chinese American immigration stories while still being able to relate and empathize because of the coming of age themes throughout each story.
Zhang has also published a collection of poems called Dear Jenny, We Are All Find, a non-fiction book called Hags, and has written a plethora of essays for Rookie, an online magazine for teens.
By Jhareese Walker
Tim Gautreaux is a novelist and short story writer who was born in 1947 in Morgan City, Louisiana. Some of his published books are: The Missing, The Clearing, and Welding with Children. In an interview with Dayne Sherman, An American journalist, Gautreaux said, “I just learned along the way that writing comes from living. Living doesn’t come from writing. The best way to learn how to write about children is to have a couple of your own” (Sherman). Gautreaux exemplifies this mindset in his book Welding with Children published by Picador in 1999. Welding with Children is a collection of eleven short stories that have a common theme of portraying the lifestyle of a southern working-class families.
There were a few stories that really intrigued me, but there was one story in particular that stood out to me more than the others. The short story “Welding with Children” is a great story simply due to the self-realization the main character experiences throughout the story. Bruton, the grandfather in the story, serves as his own life lesson. By watching the four children of his own children, he finds himself in need of some self-improvement once he notices that the actions of the children are the product of their parents’ standards. By the end of the story, Bruton attempts to turn the children to God: “’Does your mamma ever talk to y’all about, you know, God?’ ‘My mamma says God when she’s cussing Melvin,’ Tamynette said.” (Gautreaux 8). While not having done the greatest job of raising his own children, he wants to do better by his grandchildren. A few things that I like about the text was the southern dialect that Gautreaux included within the story. He seems to include a little of himself and his heritage throughout the whole text. Also, in another short story called “Easy Pickings”, Gautreaux writes about an old lady who gets robbed by a man that goes by the name of Big Blade:
Big Blade growled, giving the old woman a push toward her screen door. ‘I want your money’…’Well, I be damn. Ain’t you got nobody better to rob than an ol’ lady whose husband died twenty-nine years ago of a heart attack in a bourrée game holding ace, king, queen of trumps?’” (Gautreaux 63).
Many of the stories in his collection are unique scenarios which make each story fun to read. Many people might enjoy this text because each story can be fun to read even for the students that don’t usually like reading. Each storyline in the collection is unique which instantly can draw the reader to the story. Not only can it be fun to read, but there are life lessons that can be taken from each of these stories. Being able to read a text that is fun, yet possesses the capabilities to be informative, is special and is not something that every book can do.
By Kayla Vetter
I normally never read horror/sci-fi books. I’m terrified of them actually. So, Get in Trouble was a very interesting read for me. I ended up finding it quite enjoyable. Kelly Link really has a gift for writing about modern day lives twisted into a sci-fi magic filled world. Each story is filled with a different subject matter all relating to broken love, magic, and paranormal activity in some form. In each story, the reader goes on an adventure. A unique adventure.
Kelly Link has written may books over the years. Get in Trouble is her newest book, written in 2016. The collection of stories are pieces from other books put together into one book. Ms. Link is the cofounder of Small Beer Press. A few of her stories have been published in The Magazine of Fantasy and Science Fiction, The Best American Short Stories, and Prize Stories: The O. Henry Awards. She is also the recipient of a grant from the National Endowment for the Arts. So, she’s kind of a big deal. Her work shows that. The stories literally speak for themselves. I didn’t feel like I was reading them. I felt like I was living them! When Ms. Link isn’t conquering the world through her writing she resides in Northampton, Massachusetts with her husband and daughter.
The collection throughout this book deals with magic and journey with the main character. In her first story “The Summer People,” Link takes you on a journey with Fran. A teenager who is not permitted to leave the grounds of her town. An alcoholic father who takes off to be with Jesus. Ophelia, who is a lonely rich high society teenager and only friend to Fran. Then there are the Summer People, who are not your typical summer people. They live up the road from Fran in a unique living space, a two-story house with moss as the carpet. The Summer People have a unique trade creating magical toys for Fran. The Monkey Egg, is described as a one-of-a-kind toy with “two pincerlike legs and a scorpion tail made of figured brass shot out of the bottom hemisphere.” “The top of the hemisphere opened, and two arms wriggled out and reached up” (Link 13). The egg is magical. Fran also contains the capability to see into the future. She also processes a tent with two views, the present and the future. During Fran’s encounter with the flu, Ophelia takes on the task of getting help from the Summer People which will change her future forever.
The Summer People was probably my favorite story I read. It’s magical, visually colorful, and adventurous. The only thing I hate is the ending. The ending made me mad and had me question Fran. What kind of friend was Fran? What happened to Ophelia? Did Fran screw her over? But I’ll let you decide when you pick up the story and read it for yourself.
By Clayton Van Horn
I was assigned to read Bats Out of Hell by Barry Hannah (1978). This book is just under 400 pages and is filled to the top with ridiculous humor; at least it was humor in my eyes. Barry Hannah has written many works that precede this collection of short stories. Those works include Airplanes, which many would say is beneficial to read before diving into Bats Out of Hell, which is exactly what I did.
I loved the work, but I must admit that I caught on to the story-telling, and humor strategy slowly. I understood the stories at the end of the collection far more fully than the stories at the beginning of the collection. This collection of short stories is a very acquired taste. They are an acquired taste in the same sense that The Office (US) is an acquired taste. It takes a season or two to understand the humor and jokes. Just like while I was reading Bats Out of Hell it took a few stories for me to fully enjoy the stories.
My favorite story was High-water Railers. And the title of this short story is hilarious when you think about what this story is about. And that goes for every story in the collection. This short story, High-Water Railers, is about two old fishermen that go fishing and talk about how they missed out on sexual experiences, and they regret their decisions that led them away from their sexual fantasies. It is quite funny to me because Barry Hannah did a great job about showing the “old man’s back in his day” type of humor. This old man theme goes for the entire short story collection. Almost every main character in the collection reminds me of the old man from Pixar’s UP, the movie about the house that can fly by balloons. And after doing some research into Barry Hannah’s other works, there is a very similar form of humor and writing throughout Hannah’s works.
By Christina Spillman
Carmen Maria Machado’s debut book was shortlisted for the National Book Award for Fiction after being published by Graywolf Press in 2017. Her Body and Other Parties is a modern, feminist take on horror and science fiction. This collection of short stories has eight pieces, each of which seems to stand alone in its own world. Each story blends a paranormal framework filled with the types of stories women feel may have been lifted directly from their lives.
Her magnum opus is her opener: “The Husband Stitch.” Machado draws inspiration for this piece of hauntingly magical realism from creepy kids’ tales, specifically one called “The Green Ribbon” which tells the story of a girl whose ribbon on her neck holds her head on. She tells a discerning and disturbing grown-up version: “‘Why do you want to hide it from me?’ 'I'm not hiding it. It just isn't yours.’” Despite loving her, and not being “evil,” the husband can’t resist wanting to see underneath the ribbon, therefore killing his wife. This story presents a lot of thematic ideas and questions that continue on throughout all the stories in the book: the autonomy of women, physical pleasure (sex, food), and morally ambiguous love.
Machado’s poetic prose weaves stories that not only call attention to morals of the individual, but modern society. She often speaks, directly or indirectly, about what is fair and unfair, especially in regard to the treatment of women in intimate relationships. She writes, “Not all of us can deal with the illumination that comes with justice.” There is often a question asked implicitly by the narrator: Can they do this to me? Should they do this to me? “Inventory” tells the stories of the narrator’s lovers as a deadly plague sweeps the USA. As the narrator watches the world die, she takes on lovers who find refuge in her home. This discussion of women taking on the good and the bad to make it better for others is obvious in these stories. One of her narrators quotes her father, saying, “You never live with a woman, you live inside of her.”
These stories are good for people simply looking for a new take on sci-fi or women looking for feminist literature. I enjoyed that much of it was metaphorical right alongside the literal words. Her stories are somewhat traditional in structure, but she has a real strength for episodic pieces ( like “Inventory” and “Especially Heinous,” which is a riff on Law and Order). Some moments may come off confusing and require re-reading, but some of the intrigue her stories provide is how open they are to interpretation. If looking for a read to make you question the text, the author, the world, or perhaps yourself, read Her Body and Other Parties.
By Fernando Silva
Tabloid Dreams is a collection of stories written by award winning author Robert Olen Butler first published in Oct. 15, 1997. Butler has a good number of previously published titles under his belt, a few of which being the Pulitzer Prize winning short story collection A Good Scent on Strange Mountain and novels such as Sun Dogs and Wabash. Butler’s style of writing is that of magical realism, a style which is as it is named, magical.
With a name like that, you’ll be getting something similar to your expectations: a-true-to-life setup followed by mystical or outlandish events. One my personal favorites in the collection is “Doomsday Meteor Is Coming” in which protagonist Linus learns of a possible earth-ending event, and must now worry himself not only with the possibility of the end of life as he knows it, but also has to deal with his girlfriend Janis’ desire to “get [her] left nipple pierced, the one over my heart.”
What really stuck out to me in my reading of the a few of his stories was the author’s ability to get across the “weirdness” of talking. Now, I don’t simply mean this in the sense that some people just have a strange way of talking, but that the characters the author writes don’t think the same, cookie-cutter way. Linus from “Doomsday Meteor Is Coming”, a young man wondering about piercing his nipple, has a different manner of going about his daily routine, thinking briefly on the events going on around him and doing so in the words of your average guy, and Gertie from “Woman Loses Cookie Bake-Off, Sets self on Fire” is an older woman, close to the end of her life (by self-immolation) who is thinking clearly on the past and events that have brought her to the point she’s at thoroughly. While the thought may seem simple to you in a “yeah, not everyone talks or thinks the same way, that’s obvious” way, it’s not simple to get a hold of it, but Butler does so rather well.
Coming off what he did well, there was one major flaw I saw in this book, and that was that the book simply not being a particularly great example of the genre of magical realism. I don’t mean this in the sense that the book is written poorly, but more that it isn’t particularly out there. The book has a feel similar to reading crazy outlines from online news outlets that just couldn’t be true, but the more you read on, the more you see the reality in the situation, but not really any of the magic. I can understand this more likely than not is the intention, but don’t come to the collection expecting something like Borges.
In the end, I’d say this book is a great read for anyone looking for stories written by an author who really knows how to go “out there” in his plots and has distinct, well portrayed characters throughout.
By Esmeralda Pineda
Lydia Davis, an American writer, brings upon a collection of short stories known as Can’t and Won’t. Davis was born in Massachusetts into a teaching set of parents. Her works have received recognition and have been awarded the Man Booker International Prize, the MacArthur Fellowship, and several other awards. Can’t and Won’t, published on April 8, 2014 by Farrar, Straus and Giroux, demonstrates an unusual way to bring about a collection of short stories.
The book provides a nontraditional setup of narratives. There are stories with a different layout than what most readers are used to. For example, in “Her Geography: Illinois”, Davis writes, “She knows she is in Chicago. But she does not yet realize that she is in Illinois.” Part of the style of writing is awkward, like in this example, but it could be related to a way of reading deeper into the words and looking for a hidden message. An example of reading deeper into this short story could have the reader thinking about the bigger picture of a situation or the character not connecting two things that are in common. It could go into several directions of interpretation.
One that stood out was “Short Conversation (in Airport Departure Lounge)”, reading, “Is that a new sweater?” one woman asks another, a stranger, sitting next to her. The other woman says it’s not. There is no further conversation.” There is not entirely a lot in this short story, but it ironically says a lot about people. It could be read to say people notice specific things, but not much follows that sort of conversation into great details. Also, it raises the topic of strangers making connections in any type of place. This was more a relatable story, making connections to things such as clothing items as well as people.
Seeing as how the book jumps around in a nontraditional style of narratives, the collection is diverse in the way it raises many questions after each short story. It does not have a direct answer to them, but it makes the reader think of possible paths the story may lead to. “Random” is a good term to sum up the collection. Anyone who is willing to step out of the traditional style of a reading book would enjoy Davis’s collection to find deeper meanings as well as humor.